Fatal Deception
Grade : C+

April Hunt has written a handful of romantic suspense novels, but I haven’t yet read anything of hers, which is what prompted me to pick up Fatal Deception, book three in her series about the Steele siblings, all of whom are ex-military and who now own and run a private security firm. Before I go any further, I’ll warn ahead that the novel’s suspense plotline centres around a deadly virus (more along the lines of Ebola than COVID) which, given we’re in the midst of a pandemic at time of writing, might not be a storyline with wide appeal.  I confess I picked the book up for review without paying much attention to the synopsis (or if I did, I’d forgotten it by the time I got around to reading it!) – but in the end, I was more put off by the lack of a proper romance in the story than I was by the subject matter!

Isabel – Isa – Santiago is a former army medic who now works as a virologist for Tru Tec Industries, where she’s heading up a government sponsored research project on an Ebola-like virus known as FC-5.  It’s a normal day in a normal week, and she’s just finishing up for the day when four masked and armed individuals enter the lab and hold Isa and two of her colleagues at gunpoint while they steal the FC-5 samples and then make a swift getaway.

Specialists in anti-terrorism, covert extractions and stuff the government can’t get its hands dirty with, Steele Security’s existence is known only to a select few – one of whom brings them in to find out what went down at Tru Tec and to head up the hunt for the virus.  Roman is the second oldest of the Steele brothers and by far the grumpiest; he likes civilian life just fine provided he doesn’t have to deal with actual people, and still carries a shedload of guilt about the incident that ended his military career and saw him lose his left leg below the knee.

Roman and Isa are instantly, strongly attracted to one another and immediately go into denial mode – she because she has a fixed idea of the sort of man she wants, someone safe and dependable (and maybe just a bit dull); he because he’s still struggling with guilt over what he sees as a failure to protect his colleague on his final deployment.  Roman quickly sums Isa up as a talented, dedicated woman who [is] as allergic to failure as {he is], and the fact that they’re both type-A personalities means they clash frequently. Following an attempt to kidnap Isa a few days after the break in at the lab, Roman wants to keep her out of the firing line as much as possible, where Isa wants and needs to be actively working to counter the threat by continuing her research on the virus and developing a cure.

Things step up a gear when Isa receives news of a few cases of what is clearly a hemorrhaagic disease in the small, remote Alaskan town of Beaver Ridge.  Chances are high that the patients have been infected with FC-5, and there’s no way the virus got there on its own; Beaver Ridge is pretty isolated, and can only be reached by seaplane. Only a small number of inhabitants have been infected so far, but it’s only a matter of time before more become unwell, and it’s now a race against time to discover the source of the infection – and track down the people responsible for the theft of the virus.

The suspense storyline works quite well up until around the halfway point when it seems to fragment and become kind of episodic.  We move from Alaska (and another kidnap attempt) back to DC via Texas and a visit to Isa’s grandfather – because she couldn’t just call him to tell him the Steele team was sending someone to keep an eye out for his safety, she has to waste  time she says she doesn’t have enough of actually going there and then spends the weekend there for some local festival or other.  The second half of the book drags until near the very end really; we’re back in the lab while Isa continues her search for a cure… which doesn’t make for particularly exciting reading.  Kudos to the author for keeping the identity of the villain relatively well under-wraps until the reveal (I had it narrowed down to two possibles), although their motivations are inconsistent.  But ultimately, I had expected the book to be based more around the search for the guys who stole the virus rather than sitting around in a lab while Roman and Isa moon over one another - when they’re not having explosive sex and then pushing each other away.

Which brings me to the romance.  Or lack thereof.  There’s a definite spark between Isa and Roman and they have plenty of sex (the scenes are well-written) but there’s little to no relationship development.  Roman has met Isa a grand total of ONCE when his brothers start ribbing him about his being interested in her, and it’s not long after that his over-protective alpha gene kicks inIsa is spunky and takes no crap – she can take care of herself pretty well in a fight – and she goes for what she wants (and when she decides she wants Roman, he’s toast), but she’s suffering from an overabundance of guilt over her dead fiancé and I got fed up with all the metaphorical handwringing.  I did, however, appreciate the moment were Roman tries to pull a “I’m leaving you because I can’t make you happy” stunt and Isa calls him on his crap.  But basically, I never saw anything between them but lust, and all the lovey-dovey stuff at the end comes out of nowhere.

There’s an entertaining secondary cast, although none are really more than two-dimensional – which is also true of the leads;  they have interesting backstories, but they never felt organic.  Fatal Deception was, in the end, not much more than mildly entertaining.  It wasn’t bad, but wasn’t quite good enough to earn a recommendation.

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Reviewed by Caz Owens
Grade : C+

Sensuality: Warm

Review Date : November 15, 2020

Publication Date: 11/2020

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Caz Owens

I’m a musician, teacher and mother of two gorgeous young women who are without doubt, my finest achievement :)I’ve gravitated away from my first love – historical romance – over the last few years and now read mostly m/m romances in a variety of sub-genres. I’ve found many fantastic new authors to enjoy courtesy of audiobooks - I probably listen to as many books as I read these days – mostly through glomming favourite narrators and following them into different genres.And when I find books I LOVE, I want to shout about them from the (metaphorical) rooftops to help other readers and listeners to discover them, too.
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