While the Duke Was Sleeping

Have you ever had a whole lot of fun reading a book while also being completely mentally exhausted by it? While the Duke Was Sleeping is fast-paced, fun, and spirited, but it’s also such a dizzying merry-go-round you’ll want to sit down and take a breath after a few chapters. Still, it’s a great time.

Adelaide “Della” Rosenborne’s charge, Lady Cordelia Highwater, doesn’t want to marry the man her father has chosen for her, and Adelaide decides to save their mutual skins by putting her on a ship to a place where she can hide out until the drama dies down. Unfortunately, they can’t find a sailor willing to take them (women on ships happen to be bad luck). The two women head to Berwick and rent a room from Peter, a duke who immediately takes a shine to Cordelia, who panics at his marital advances, knocks him over a cat and sends him into a coma. With no other witnesses to the crime, Adelaide is bribed into posing as her mistress, the Duke’s presumptive fiancée. It shouldn’t be any great shakes; she’ll approach Peter when he wakes up and talk him into letting Cordelia out of the marriage.

Journeyman Sir Everett “Rhett” Montgomery is a seductive ladies’ man who meets ugly with Adelaide while she’s trying to talk any boat captain she can on the dock into taking Codelia to France, which results in a failed pass from him and a dunk in the Thames for them both. He finds her space to clean off, they have one forbidden kiss before she disappears, but he can’t stop thinking of her. The temporary duke while his brother, Peter, is in a coma, he’d been previously called back from his gambolings by his brother and looks forward to going back to his carousing once his brother wakens – he’s not been comfortable in England since his fiancée broke his heart years ago. When Adelaide introduces herself to him as Cordelia, Rhett is suspicious; this brawling, beery, cursing girl does not sound like the fearful Cordelia at all.

“Cordellia” settles into the extended Montgomery clan, which includes four lively sisters. As Rhett and Adelaide get closer, her double life threatens to pop – leaving her caught between two brothers.

Rhett is an almost parody of a rake who gets lovestruck and learns his lesson, while Adelaide is a tough, uncompromising and clever lady. Their romance burns slowly and is filled with a lovely and understandable tension. I liked Peter and even Cordelia and the sisters, though the latter aren’t very well defined (but probably will be in their upcoming books).

This is a frenetic, chaotic, wallpapery historical that’s still a hoot. There is a marble phallus and a rogue cat and much Nonsense. If you don’t like highjinks in your romances, you should avoid this one. It might help if you like the romcom it’s based on, While You Were Sleeping, which I love. I had good fun reading While The Duke Was Sleeping, and if you open your heart to its ridiculousness, you might too.

Lisa Fernandes

Lisa Fernandes

Lisa Fernandes is a writer, reviewer and recapper who lives somewhere on the East Coast. Formerly employed by Firefox.org and Next Projection, she also currently contributes to Women Write About Comics. Read her blog at http://thatbouviergirl.blogspot.com/, follow her on Twitter at http://twitter.com/thatbouviergirl or contribute to her Patreon at https://www.patreon.com/MissyvsEvilDead or her Ko-Fi at ko-fi.com/missmelbouvier
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Susan/DC

If his older brother is a duke, why is he a Sir rather than Lord So-and-So?

Lisa Fernandes

This I can’t remember, but that’s the form of address used in the book.

Suzanne

“…who knocks him over a cat…” I’m not sure what this means, but TBH, this review confused me. I get that the book was based on the movie WYWS, which I liked back in the day, but I’ll pass on this “frenetic, chaotic, wallpapery historical.” They aren’t my cup of tea. Can I ask, Lisa, what does “meets ugly with” mean? I’m old, 60. Is it a new turn of phrase in Romancelandia I’m not aware of? Is it the opposite of the “meet-cute”? (Another turn of phrase which I think gives the romance genre a bad rep, but that’s a discussion for another time.)

Lisa Fernandes
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https://fanlore.org/wiki/Meet_Cute#Meet_Ugly

Susan/DC

The review says that Adelaide meets ugly with Sir Rhett, but it appears that both Cordelia and Adelaide meet ugly with their heroes (guessing that Cordelia and the duke do get together at some point): Cordelia shoves the duke backwards and he falls into a coma, Adelaide and Rhett fall into the Thames.

Lisa Fernandes
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And yes, accurate.

Elaine S

Is this for real? Sounds like a mish-mash of confusing story threads and badly behaving, overwritten characters. I did wonder how a woman was soliciting a boat for France in Berwick but gets dunked in the Thames. Berwick is about 350 miles from London. And what is a journeyman knight/baronet about? I thought a journeyman was a skilled craftsman/tradesman? Thanks for your review, Lisa, as I now can consider myself warned off this one.

Lisa Fernandes

That’s because she solicits the boat in London before they escape, then they flee to Berwick by coach, which I tried to hint at via review context clues. I use the term “journeyman” simply to describe his rakish gamboling versus any professional choices. It’s a very “chill your brain” kind of romance, not gonna be for everyone!

Caz Owens

I’m with Elaine. Sounds like one to avoid.

And a journeyman is definitely a working man – it most often means someone who has learned a trade or trades and who travels around to find work. Nothing to do with rakish gamboling: https://www.merriam-webster.com/dictionary/journeyman

Last edited 1 year ago by Caz Owens
Lisa Fernandes

Eh, different strokes!

I was thinking of the term “Journeyman actor” as well but meh!

Dabney Grinnan

It’s also used in sports to depict someone who travels from team to team.

Lisa Fernandes

There you go!

Caz Owens

Which is what the definition says – someone skilled in a trade who travels around and earns a living. It doesn’t mean a bloke who travels around doing random stuff – certainly not a nobleman, who wouldn’t have worked for a living.

Last edited 1 year ago by Caz Owens
Lisa Fernandes

I mean, I’m fine with the word being replaced with something like “traveling.” Makes no difference to me.

Dabney Grinnan

I think it’s fine. Language is something we change the meanings of over time, use for our own devices, make up new words around.

I understood what you were getting at!

Nah
Last edited 1 year ago by Maybe Not
Indira

I loved While You were Sleeping! So this is definitely on my TBR.

Lisa Fernandes

Hope you like it!